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helping healthcare organizations grow

Feature Article: 5 Copy Killing Mistakes
Recommended Resource: If Not Now... Then When? by Peter Fogel
Upcoming Speaking Engagements
Visit my blog - The Healthcare Marketer here
Check out my MySpace page at: myspace.com/amarketingconnection

Kelly's Challenge: I challenge you to pick the hardest of today's top 5 mistakes and improve it in one of the projects you're working on.

Did You Know? The goal of every piece of marketing material should be to induce action.

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July 20. 2007
Vol. IIII, Issue 29
ISSN# 1539-4875
$197 annually
Published every Friday

A Message From Kelly

Welcome to The Healthcare Marketing Connection! This week we are taking a look at 5 of the most common copywriting mistakes I see. These mistakes don't have as much to do with your ability to write as they do your ability to sell.

We are putting together the final touches of a 5-part class on copy editing. Class size will be limited, so if you would like to learn more about the class, drop an email to: Sylvie@TheCopywritingInstitute.com and we'll make sure you're the first to receive class information.

This week marks the official end of this tennis league and I lost every match. Every single one. The twilight league starts next week and goes into fall. I signed myself up for this league last spring but am debating if I should still play. I do have fun...I just lose. A lot.

To your success!

Kelly

Feature Article

5 Copy Killing Mistakes

You may have passed freshman comp with flying colors ten years ago, but mastering the skill of writing college essays does not make you a copywriter. While your ability to create complete, comprehensive sentences is important to writing successful copy, your understanding of psychology and selling techniques, as well as your ability to persuade through the written word are keys to success.

Let’s take a look at five sales killing copywriting mistakes writers make over and over.

Copywriting mistake #1...Informing without persuading.

This is probably the most common mistake I see writers make, especially in the health care industry. They inform and educate the reader with great information, but they don’t take the reader to the next step by persuading them to take an action. A common copywriting pitfall is to teach and not sell.

Copywriting mistake #2...Failing to grab attention.

There are several ways you grab your prospects attention, the first being the headline. It’s easy to develop a headline that sums up your topic, but will it make your reader want to know more? Does it entice them to read on to find out how they can learn more? You can grab attention in a headline by asking a question, stating a startling fact or statistic (you then quickly back up that statement in your first paragraph), or by creating intrigue or mystery. Again, the reader has to read on to find out more.

Copywriting mistake #3...Not backing up your claim.

Most business make "a claim" about their product or services. Their claim is in what differentiates them from their competitors. They are faster or cleaner or error-proof. Making a claim is a good marketing tactic and I recommend all businesses do this. However, when you make a claim readers may be skeptical. You need to prove to them you CAN fulfill your claim. You can do this by using testimonials and guarantees in your copy. You can also show you walk your talk by using customer stories and examples in your copy. It's your job as the writer to make it easy to believe.

Copywriting mistake #4...Speaking to ALL your prospects

A sure-fire way to not connect with anyone is to try to talk to everyone. Before you get started on a copywriting project it’s important you clearly define who you are speaking to. Narrow this down in your head to the description of one specific person. This is the person you should talk to when you write. Don’t make the mistake of talking to everyone that MAY buy your product or read your brochure. When you write to one specific person, your writing will be strong and you are more likely to connect with the many people that are attracted to your offerings.

Copywriting mistake #5...Telling and not showing

Readers will believe you and want to learn more when you show them examples of how your services benefit them, rather than if you tell them. After all, why should they believe you - you are selling something to them. Showing people how you can help them through examples, good testimonials, and demonstrations is much stronger than simply telling them what you can do.

(c) 2007, A Marketing Connection

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Recommended Resource

This week Kelly recommends Peter J. Fogel's acclaimed book, "If Not Now...Then When? Stories and Strategies of People Over 40 Who Have Successfully Reinvented Themselves". Read more and order your copy here: www.tinyurl.com/dtq97

If you have any other great resources you'd like me to share with everyone, let me know and I'll check it out. kelly@KellyRobbinsLLC.com

Upcoming Speaking Engagements

"Marketing 101 - Basic skills to communicate your value" - Wednesday August 15th Kelly Robbins with Philippa Kennealy MD of The Entrepreneurial MD

Annual SHSMD conference in Washington DC - October 3rd - Kelly will be presenting a 3 hour workshop, entitled It's Lonely Out Here...How to Connect with Customers When You're on a Limited Budget.

Fr*ee Marketing Resources

To learn more about healthcare copywriting and marketing, visit my Web site at www.KellyRobbinsLLC.com/article_archives.shtml. There are tons of fr ee articles on a variety of helpful topics.