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helping healthcare organizations grow

Feature Article: 10 point copy checklist for healthcare marketers
Recommended Resource: http://adage.com/power150/
Upcoming Speaking Engagements
Visit my blog - The Healthcare Marketer here
Check out my MySpace page at: myspace.com/amarketingconnection

Kelly's Challenge: I challenge you to be proactive about "the flaws" in your company's systems. What steps do you take to address them swiftly and proficiently?

Did You Know? Spell checking should be used cautiously and only as a small part of editing and reviewing your copy.

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August 10, 2007
Vol. IIII, Issue 32
ISSN# 1539-4875
$197 annually
Published every Friday

A Message From Kelly

Welcome to The Healthcare Marketing Connection! These last few weeks I've been swamped - which is great. With several copywriting assignments, consulting gig's and now teaching onsite copywriting classes, I've had to make some changes to my "working systems" to keep things going at this ultra high speed. With the volume turned up super high some I was disappointed to see some flaws exposed in my system. As any manager knows, when you discover something that's not working you need to fix it right away. With that said...

This week's feature article is a checklist I've developed for copywriters to use after they've written copy and before they send the copy to their client! There's nothing worse than errors and mistakes to make a bad impression on a new client. Or copy that's not as sharp as it could be because you were rushing.

Wednesday I registered my three kids for school. $250 and three hours later they are ready to go next week. I can feeeeeeel how quiet my life is going to be very soon. And I can see how clean my house will stay all day. The joys of motherhood. Ten days and counting...

To your success!

Kelly

Feature Article

10 point copy checklist for healthcare marketers

When we write copy, whether for ourselves or others, we often write under a time crunch. In the rush to research, schedule interviews, determine the direction of the article, and talk directly to the target audience among several other things, there is room to make mistakes.

There are many simple mistakes copywriters make repeatedly that have a huge impact on their copy's response and on their client's satisfaction. Developing a checklist to use when you've finished a writing project can help ease your mind. You know that you are submitting quality copy, that you've hit your writing goals and that the copywriting basics are correct.

  1. Headline: Does your headline focus on an emotional benefit or a pain? What attention grabbing techniques did you use? Did you ask a question? Make a bold statement (that you prove right away in your copy)?

  2. Copy: Is there "meat" to your copy or is it filled with fluff? Write with depth vs. breadth. You are more likely to educate and grab reader's attention value when you go deep on one specific topic rather than discuss more and go wide. Readers find more value in the depth.

  3. Have you effectively used reputable facts and statistics to either prove a point, grab attention or both?

  4. Who did you talk to in your copy? Was it one specific person and not "all" of the people that could be reading it?

  5. Can you delete any unnecessary words? Words like that; and; really; like; is; are; will be; were; to name a few.

  6. Do all of your sentences end with a strong word? Nothing should end with weak words such as "that". The end of the sentence is the word you are leaving your reader with. The words you use at the end of your sentences are immediately and automatically emphasized, so as a copywriter it's important you use them wisely.

  7. Overall: Have you read your article out loud? Does it flow smoothly in all areas?

  8. Use your readability menu if you are using Microsoft word. To set this up for yourself go to "Tools" and click on the "Options" button at the bottom. Click on the spelling and grammar tab and then check the box for "show readability statistics".

  9. Check for variability in your sentence length. In general, shorter sentences are better when writing copy. Try not to have many sentences above 15 or 20 words, and check through your copy to see that there are a variety of lengths.

  10. Call to action: Is your call to action clear and specific? Could there be any confusion about what step the reader should take next?

Having a post-writing checklist helps ensure your copy is strong and efficient before you send it off to your clients or your customers, and can reduce both a writer’s anxiety and unnecessary errors.

(c) 2007, A Marketing Connection

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Recommended Resource

This week Kelly recommends AdAge. AdAge has listed the 150 most popular marketing blogs. Check them out here: http://adage.com/power150/

If you have any other great resources you'd like me to share with everyone, let me know and I'll check it out. kelly@KellyRobbinsLLC.com

Upcoming Speaking Engagements

"Marketing 101 - Basic skills to communicate your value" - Wednesday August 15th Kelly Robbins with Philippa Kennealy MD of The Entrepreneurial MD Register for this free teleseminar here

Annual SHSMD conference in Washington DC - October 3rd - Kelly will be presenting a 3 hour workshop, entitled It's Lonely Out Here...How to Connect with Customers When You're on a Limited Budget.

Fr*ee Marketing Resources

To learn more about healthcare copywriting and marketing, visit my Web site at www.KellyRobbinsLLC.com/article_archives.shtml. There are tons of fr ee articles on a variety of helpful topics.